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Monday 19 October 2015

Perception

Day 18 OctPoWriMo 2015

mage from net

 Slimy slithery creature
Slithered in the backyard
Under the stars
It ruled the garden
Bringing in creeps
Every time lighting struck
Heart pounded at a galloping speed

At the first stroke of sunlight
Beaming fresh on the flowers
With trembling feet
Moved myself to open the backdoor
There still lay the long creature
Only it was not so terrifying  
There lay a harmless rope instead.


~18/10/2015~
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 October 2015 at 07:22

    perfect imagery.

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  2. Jessica Kay19 October 2015 at 12:02

    HAHAHAHA!!!!
    Oh, you have no idea how this made my heart pound. I am terrified of snakes. And I have been fooled by garden hoses, ropes, and many other items that have no right whatsoever of pretending to be other than they are. LOL.
    Well done.

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    1. Deepti Agarwal19 October 2015 at 23:39

      Yes Jesi .. you are absolutely right few things do not have a right to pretend otherwise.

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  3. payal agarwal19 October 2015 at 23:31

    Pretty cool! Ye kab hua? :D

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    1. Deepti Agarwal20 October 2015 at 01:20

      hehhe... bus yun hi pehle(when i was quiet young) kai baar hua.. :P

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  4. Abbey Michael Boyle Blount Fallin20 October 2015 at 09:48

    do share a story with bluebell short story slam week 31 today.

    http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/

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    1. Deepti Agarwal20 October 2015 at 20:59

      Thanks a lot for your visit.. Will try to submit my work.

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