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Monday, 26 October 2015

Comfort Siesta

#MondayMusings - 26 October 2015


2014

Slumbering under the tree
Tree of grace and life
Life beside the rules
Rules need to be trailed
Trailed the dreams of veracity
Veracity of knowledge
Knowledge to be gained
Gained life’s comfort
Comfort to slumber


~21/10/2015~

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8 comments:

  1. Nabanita26 October 2015 at 01:45

    Is this a specific form of poetry?
    Nicely done I must say

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    1. Deepti Agarwal26 October 2015 at 03:00

      Yes Nbanita this is in Loop Poetry format.. where last word of each line becomes the first word of next line.

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  2. Unknown26 October 2015 at 04:18

    Thank you for introducing me to this new form of poetry, Deepti. Thoroughly enjoyed.

    http://blogatcynthia.blogspot.ae/2015/10/is-it-difficult-to-make-new-friends-as.html

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  3. Richa Singh26 October 2015 at 09:14

    Comfort to slumber.. thats a new idea altogether :-) Lovely!

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  4. Unknown26 October 2015 at 22:35

    There are few things that I so enjoy as much as a good comfortable slumber. A little afternoon nap is always lovely!

    poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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