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Saturday, 17 October 2015

Pensive Dance

Day 17 OctPoWriMo 2015- Cascade(a/b/c,d/e/A,f/g/B,h/i/C)

Her flowing gown swept the floor
She glistened in sweet sweat
With warm heavy exultant breath

She tapped her elated feet
And swirled and swirled around
Her flowing gown swept the floor

Without cessation danced to the tune
Melting with the melody, Overjoyed
She glistened in sweet sweat

Pirouetted in profound meditative state
Her face radiated pure bliss
With warm heavy exultant breath

~17/10/2015~



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Day 17 OctPoWriMo

# Cascade Form of Poetry

20 comments:

  1. Sensuous dancing is liberating.

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  2. I remember that joy, when I was young. Lovely poem.

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  3. Sounds like a meditation! Beautifully done!

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    1. Yes dancing is also a form of meditation..

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  4. Gorgeous cascading dance.

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    1. Thanks for a lovely compliment Pat-Mather

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  6. I do so love this form, and you've written to it beautifully! Bastet

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