Day 17 OctPoWriMo 2015- Cascade(a/b/c,d/e/A,f/g/B,h/i/C)
Her flowing gown swept the floor
She glistened in sweet sweat
With warm heavy exultant breath
She tapped her elated feet
And swirled and swirled around
Her flowing gown swept the floor
Without cessation danced to the tune
Melting with the melody, Overjoyed
She glistened in sweet sweat
Pirouetted in profound meditative state
Her face radiated pure bliss
With warm heavy exultant breath
~17/10/2015~
Day 17 OctPoWriMo
# Cascade Form of Poetry
Sensuous dancing is liberating.
ReplyDeleteYes Indeed it is.. Thanx Vivinfrance
DeleteA visual treat. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Marilyn
DeleteI remember that joy, when I was young. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThats good to know ..
DeleteSounds like a meditation! Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteYes dancing is also a form of meditation..
DeleteGorgeous cascading dance.
ReplyDeleteThanx a lot De
DeleteBeautiful cascade. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Connie
Deletecivic and powerful.
ReplyDeleteThanks for a lovely compliment Pat-Mather
Deletedancing is cool
ReplyDeleteI do so love this form, and you've written to it beautifully! Bastet
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Georgia
DeleteLovely Cascade. :)
ReplyDelete:)
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