Under the umbrella
Walking hand in hand
Away from all qualms
Love birds craved to fly
To reach the rainbow in the sky
Asking for its colours
To fill their life
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Under the umbrella
Looking intently in the eyes
Smiling at each other
Cherishing the rain
Melting in the Petrichor
Requesting for its freshness
Conquering their existence
Under the umbrella
They live happily
Walking hand in hand
Looking keenly
Revering the gift of love
Merging with the beats
Relishing togetherness !!
~22/04/2016~
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| Paraty2012 , Brazil |
So romantic
ReplyDeleteLovely read
Thanks a lot DeeDee
DeleteVery nice. Thanks.
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DeleteEnjoyable indeed
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DeleteYou still surprise me with your poems Deepti - I never know whether they're going to be happy, sad, romantic or eerie. This one was romantic and sweet. Leanne @ cresting the hill
ReplyDeleteElement of surprise is always the key to life.. :)
DeleteThnx Leanne for going thru all my work.
There's something very romantic about sheltering under one umbrella. Your poem captures that feeling.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kalpana
DeleteLove in the air! Lovely romantic and charming!
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Thanks a lot kala
DeleteAw! Very sweet and beautiful. So much better than the one I came up with. :)
ReplyDeleteThnx a lot Robin.. I dont think its better then yours.. but yes its a bit different than yours.
DeleteI love "under the umbrella" moments :) Just like you described them!
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DeleteSuch a lovely poem. Conjures up a romantic image.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Debbie
DeleteHow romantic! *battling eyelashes*
ReplyDeletehehhe .. thanku thanku
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