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Friday, 16 October 2015

Lifeless quietness


Day 16 - OctPoWriMo 2015
image Prompt OctPoWriMo #16


Crushed autumn dreams
Flowers bloom in her shadow
Slumber peacefully
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Blue pink and orange hues
Blanketed the fragile numb frame
Livid silence hurts


~16/10/2015

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13 comments:

  1. Sunita16 October 2015 at 00:55

    Beauty :)

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  2. Bastet's Waka Library16 October 2015 at 01:23

    Sweetly written - Bastet

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  3. payal agarwal16 October 2015 at 02:42

    well written! I especially liked the second half. :)

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  4. Carol Campbell16 October 2015 at 09:57

    Oh so simple yet very deep!

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  5. Nithya Venkat16 October 2015 at 19:15

    Beautiful!

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  6. Abbie16 October 2015 at 19:31

    Short and powerful. Love the autumn on your blog! Come visit me http://abbiesadventurediaries.blogspot.com/

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  7. Unknown16 October 2015 at 22:53

    I've felt this way, not wanting to wake up and when I did it was like going through the motions. Beautifully written!

    http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2015/10/octpowrimo-2015-day-17-dancing-in-web.html

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    1. Deepti Agarwal17 October 2015 at 03:05

      Yeah at times we do feel like dragging ourselves.
      Thanks a lot Thalia

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