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Thursday, 7 April 2016

Gun shot

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Lively chirpy young couple
Sat hand in hand
Over a cup of steaming hot coffee
Lost in their dreamy love world
Planning for their future
Finding names together
Designing the room with a cot
Thinking about the colour scheme
Will it be “Blue” or “Pink”
Or should they settle for “Yellow”?

Two masked man jumped from the bike
With hateful blood shot eyes
Fired gun shots blindly

With piercing pain
And a direct hole in her heart
She bid farewell
Greying his world altogether
For no fault of theirs
Their dreams shattered in front of his eyes
What will he do with so
Much hatred in world
When will people learn
To Live and to Let live?

~04/04/2016~






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20 comments:

  1. Very vivid discription. You have a way with words, it just came alive in my imagination. Nice post!

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    1. Thanks a lot Karnika for liking my work.

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  2. that was so sad - all those hopes and dreams gone. This is such a reflection of the terrorist attacks lately where so many innocent bystanders lose their lives in a moment. Leanne @ cresting the hill

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    1. True Leanne.. Innocent have to suffer at the cost of few bad elements.

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    So much pain and power in so few words. Excellent job.

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    1. Thanx a lot J Lenni for stopping by and sharing your views.

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  4. Tragic and impactful with a profound message . visiting from http://www.poojasharmarao.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks a lot Pooja. Yes its tragic..

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  5. How just in a spur of moment dreams are shot dead.
    Painful.

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    1. Yes SrishTi thats how life is Unpredictable.. one moment could be happy the other filled with agaony.

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  6. I look forward to your posts and read all. Lovely as usual

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  7. Oh I was so touched by your poem. I felt like I was there and experienced the shock and devastation. Beautiful piece. Sue @Sizzling60 from
    Sizzling Towards Sixty

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    1. Thnx Sue for experiencing the words.

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  8. Deepti,

    Clean and simple description and well written. We all should try to leave things as they are if not worsen. Forget and forgive and move on.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    1. You are right dear.. Forget and Forgive is the only Mantra for a peaceful life.

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  9. So suddenly things change in one's life after a tragedy and chaos ruins everything. This is a good example of how terror can hurt you bad. Live and let live.

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    1. Yes Tiger.. no moment is same.. one moment you r happy n other moment sad.. Thats Life..

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  10. how beautiful this world will be if people learn to live and let live.

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