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Wednesday, 7 October 2015

Feel -Green

Day 8 OctPoWriMo
2015


Lovely greens surrounding
Captivates with crisp sparkle
Gives a wisdom of Life
Feel alive!!

~08/10/2015~



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14 comments:

  1. Nithya Venkat7 October 2015 at 22:48

    Green is a color that makes me feel calm and relaxed. Nicely penned.

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    1. Deepti Agarwal7 October 2015 at 23:29

      Thank you Nithya.. Yes Indeed Green is a very special colour full of life.

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  2. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost 7 October 2015 at 23:26

    The words help you feel the picture. The green leaves, the cool water. Wonderful!

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    1. Deepti Agarwal7 October 2015 at 23:31

      Thanks a lot Cara for submerging yourself in the pic and my words.

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  3. Bastet's Waka Library8 October 2015 at 04:16

    :-) perfect poem for autumn!

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    1. Deepti Agarwal9 October 2015 at 01:04

      Yeah thats what I thought myself too :).. Thnx Georgia

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  4. Unknown8 October 2015 at 04:23

    O how I love this... Green is just that ...so alive... its so good... The photo enhances your poem even further! Thanks for this...it made me happier!

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    1. Deepti Agarwal9 October 2015 at 01:05

      Feeling happy to know that my words made u feel happier.. Stay Blessed Ivy.

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  5. Carol Campbell8 October 2015 at 09:03

    Very natural and pleasant!

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  6. Sunita8 October 2015 at 11:16

    What a beauty from your pen, Dee! Loved it :)

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    1. Deepti Agarwal9 October 2015 at 01:06

      Ahem Ahem ... hum toh bus aise hi likhte hain .. beauty to aap readers jaante hain..

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  7. jazzytower9 October 2015 at 18:50

    Beautiful!

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