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Thursday, 29 October 2015

Philosophical Loop

Day 29 - OctPoWriMo
L.I.F.E


Life comes to a full circle
The Beginnings today
Ends tomorrow
Only if tomorrow comes.

Nothing ends
Nothing begins
Rotating lives
Rotating  survives

If tomorrow comes
Tomorrow ends
To evolve into today
Life comes to a full circle.


~29/10/2015~

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Day 29 - OctPoWriMo
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14 comments:

  1. Cressida de Nova29 October 2015 at 01:43

    I agree with this. Life runs full circle.

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  2. payal agarwal29 October 2015 at 05:10

    "if tomorrow comes." :) That's why, I take one day at a time. :)

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  3. Nithya Venkat29 October 2015 at 05:27

    Wise words, great write.

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  4. Sunita29 October 2015 at 07:48

    Dee, this is full of life and thoughtful.

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    1. Deepti Agarwal30 October 2015 at 01:12

      Thank you Dear Sunita.. i loved your Circle of life too..

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  5. Anonymous29 October 2015 at 08:48

    simple metaphor,
    life long hope and wisdom...

    thanks for the apt metaphor.

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  6. Carol Campbell29 October 2015 at 10:03

    Circular motion is divine! Love this!

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  7. Beth Camp29 October 2015 at 23:43

    I like how the poem mirrors the endless round of seasons -- measured in lifetimes. Beautiful!

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