Day 7 OctPoWriMo 2015
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OctPoWriMo 205
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| HauzKhas 2015 |
Meandering curvy roads
Meet at life’s crossroads
Confused
Brain triggers memories
Some good some bad
Pending decisions
Carried as bundled carcass
Stinking and Oozing vermillion
Through the uplifted fog
Views the clearer picture
Healed
With soothing balm
Encasing the searing pain
Calmness
Envelops the entire persona
Uplifting the whole forte.
~08/10/2015~
OctPoWriMo 205
The oozing stinking carcass...that is exactly how I feel about making decisions...so weighted, so gross...you really captured it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anna for understanding
DeleteA very powerful poem Deepti ... very deep. Bastet
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Georgia.
Deleteanother way around...sharp imagery.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Prem
DeleteYou have nailed the prompt to perfection Dee..There is so much said in those words.
ReplyDeleteThnx Sunita.. I loved the prompt at one go..
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