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Tuesday, 20 October 2020

Bleeding Earth

Cold and immune heart beats
Galloped on a coarse road
Beating the words on icy tongue
Furry beast spits the venom
Hard blood boils and spills over
Strange Mental games are played
In the womb of Mother Earth
Soft brown mud weeps silently
~20/10/2020~

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  1. paeansunplugged20 October 2020 at 05:27

    "Soft brown mud weeps silently" such a powerful image!

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  2. payal agarwal20 October 2020 at 05:52

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  3. payal agarwal20 October 2020 at 05:54

    Power packed images here.
    "Hard blood boils and spills over
    Strange Mental games are played" Seems like you gave words to my thoughts. Couldn't have written better.

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  4. Annis Cassells20 October 2020 at 14:26

    Loved the first two lines. Your last line got me, too. Wow! Thank you. xoA

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    1. Deepti Agarwal20 October 2020 at 21:22

      Thankyou Annis for patiently reading my writes everyday and for all your appreciation..
      Good day..

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