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Thursday 1 October 2020

Time




The dark serpent slithered
Hissing silently ready to raid
Little sparrow had no where to go
Looking at her unborn children
Tears trickled down her soul
Lightning hit and struck hard
Charred serpent lies beside the burnt nest

Timeless lightning
Snarled with Glowing teeth
Silencing the Worlds

~02/10/2020~


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Participating in OctPoWriMo 2020 - Day 2

12 comments:

  1. Oooh!!vulnerability everywhere!! Excellent twist

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  2. Everyone is vulnerable! Deep thought.

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  3. Vulnerable fear expressed brilliantly! Great write!

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  4. Stunning haiku, wonderfully portrayed.

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  5. Great alliteration and tension. Thank you, Deepti. Nice to read your words again. xoA <3

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  6. Thanks a lot Annis ... This is the time iIwait formyself.... Lovely prompts and lovely poetry to read from all over the world.

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