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Driving the chariot of soul
Desires peeked from behind
With a swift hasty movement
Slashed with the conscious sword
And stepped into the nebula of oblivion
To merge with the ultimate Light
Peace falls like a shining armor
breaking all the boundaries
Melting I into
Oneness.
~08/10/2020~
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Wonderful! Oh, these lines:
ReplyDeleteDesires peeked from behind
With a swift hasty movement
Slashed with the conscious sword
Thanks a lot... This is in reference with a fight between worldly desires and merging with Almighty.
DeleteBeautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear.. Gita gyan is indeed beautiful..
DeleteThis one I read with visions of Krishna and Arjuna on the battlefield. Very powerful write.
ReplyDeleteYou got it right.. In true sense.. Arjuna is 'I', ME , My Ego and Krishna is Supreme Almighty.. Battlefield is Worldly Desires.
DeleteThis is wonderful, Deepti. You have used the reference to Mahabharata so well!
ReplyDeleteThanks.. yes Mahabharata Within..
DeleteA really powerful, beautiful poem this! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot 🙏
ReplyDeleteI love this:
ReplyDelete"Peace falls like a shining armor
breaking all the boundaries
Melting I into
Oneness"
Thank you. xoA
Thank you so much Annis. your words means a lot..
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