Campos de Jordaon, Brazil 2013 |
Walking hand in hand
On a life’s footpath
Like a wanderer in the strange realms
In search of wisdom and truth
Side by side on the sacred path
~travelling like a vagabond~
Carefree in nature and habits
Poles apart yet so near
Like the solitary railroad
Running and running never merging
Living a nomadic life.
Participating in OctPoWriMo 2020 with Word Prompts ( Traveling, vagabond, nomadic, wanderer)
and the Poetry Format as Puente a poem created by James Rasmusson, and is somewhat similar to the Diamante. Like the Diamante, you start with one aspect of a topic or issue and then, line by line, work toward another aspect. In the center is a line that bridges the two aspects together.
The form has three stanzas with the first and third having an equal number of lines and the middle stanza having only one line which acts as a bridge (puente) between the first and third stanza. The first and third stanzas convey a related but different element or feeling, as though they were two adjacent territories. The number of lines in the first and third stanza is the writer’s choice as is the choice of whether to write it in free verse or rhyme.
The center line is delineated by a tilde (~) and has ‘double duty’. It functions as the ending for the last line of the first stanza AND as the beginning for the first line of the third stanza. It shares ownership with these two lines and consequently bridges the first and third stanzas
Solitary rail road..hmm..love it's solitude.:P
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nice poem :)
Thanks a lot for liking it🙏
DeleteBeautiful poem. I loved
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Living a nomadic life.
That is so kind of you Jenni.. Thanks..
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