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Sunday 24 April 2016

Under the umbrella




Under the umbrella
Walking hand in hand
Away from all qualms
Love birds craved to fly
To reach the rainbow in the sky
Asking for its colours
To fill their life
.
Under the umbrella
Looking intently in the eyes
Smiling at each other
Cherishing the rain
Melting in the Petrichor
Requesting for its freshness
Conquering their existence
.
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Under the umbrella
They live happily
Walking hand in hand
Looking keenly
Revering the gift of love
Merging with the beats
Relishing togetherness !!

~22/04/2016~







©Copyright Deeप्ती

Paraty2012 , Brazil

20 comments:

  1. Very nice. Thanks.
    @authorparomita from
    <a href="https://rollingstonepictureproduction.wordpress.com/2016/04/25/under-the-spell-grow-up-messy </a>

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  2. You still surprise me with your poems Deepti - I never know whether they're going to be happy, sad, romantic or eerie. This one was romantic and sweet. Leanne @ cresting the hill

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    1. Element of surprise is always the key to life.. :)
      Thnx Leanne for going thru all my work.

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  3. There's something very romantic about sheltering under one umbrella. Your poem captures that feeling.

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  4. Love in the air! Lovely romantic and charming!
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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  5. Aw! Very sweet and beautiful. So much better than the one I came up with. :)

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    1. Thnx a lot Robin.. I dont think its better then yours.. but yes its a bit different than yours.

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  6. I love "under the umbrella" moments :) Just like you described them!

    @TarkabarkaHolgy from
    The Multicolored Diary
    MopDog

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  7. Such a lovely poem. Conjures up a romantic image.

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  8. How romantic! *battling eyelashes*

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