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Sunday, 3 April 2016

Chained



 
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Excruciating pain runs
Down the spine
Screeching in agony
Saline covers the face
Prickly needles burn inside
Scratchy wounds exudes fluid
Numbing tongue oozes venom

Haunting screams reverberates
In the empty halls
Yearning to flutter away
Aches in hollow frame
Waiting and waiting and waiting
To be liberated from the chains.

~03/04/2016~
  
©Copyright Deeप्ती

19 comments:

  1. Deep. Like woow. Awesome take on C

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  2. Great poem. Horrific but well written . :)

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  3. Oh what a touching post Deepti! I really admire people who can write poetry. Look forward to tomorrow. Sue @Sizzling60 from
    Sizzling Towards Sixty

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    1. Thanks a lot Sue.. Poetry has become my life line now.. Apart from blog writings I got few of my works published too.

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  4. sad and melancholy at the same time - very emotively written!
    Leanne @ cresting the hill

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    1. Thanks Leanne for your Lovely comment.

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  5. Deepthi, May your chains flutter away and may you find peace. Good rhyme and story.


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    1. Thanks a lot Tiger for showing your concern and liking my work.. This is all fiction .. I am a Poet and I try to find inspiration for my words from news, surroundings, friends, family etc etc

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  6. I can feel the poem. Well written.
    http://jahnavi-kj.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thanks Jahnavi .. your words made me happy. Coz if a work can be 'felt' than Mission accomplished :) for the writer..

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    1. Thanks a lot Morgan..
      Keep Smiling.. :)

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  8. Great poem😊
    PositiveVibes ✌
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