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With shaking hands she served dinner
He walked with a tremble even with the stick
Together they sat on that tattered bench
Under that ageing mango tree
Looking sadly at the strewn fruit
Gone are the days when they were
Relished with enthusiasm by the kids
Now only few squirrels or birds come to pick
Their loving brave son
Fought courageously at the border
Making them proud
Only to return packed in a wooden box
An ever smiling picture of him framed
And preserved forever in their hearts .
~31/03/2016~
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OMG!! Beautiful.. Poignant
ReplyDeleteOMG beautifully poignant :)
ReplyDeleteThanks lot Anupama
DeleteHow sad but poignant - thank you :) Sue @Sizzling60 from
ReplyDeleteSizzling Towards Sixty
thanks a lot Sue :)
DeleteVery touching poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Alasandra :)
Deleteso sad - and such a true picture of some of the sadness that comes with being elderly. Leanne @ cresting the hill
ReplyDeleteYes Leanne.. Old age comes with so much of loneliness and sadness that it hurts.
DeleteBeautiful and sad. I don't mind that emotion combo.
ReplyDeleteThnx Sydney
DeleteThat's really wonderful. I am speechless.
ReplyDeleteDo visit my take : Fire of love
http://facetsofadienglish.blogspot.in/2016/04/f-for-fire-of-love.html
Thnx Aditya
DeleteAww, that was sad and beautiful.
ReplyDelete~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
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Thnx a lot Patricia for liking
Deletepoignant- but the experience of far too many parents across time
ReplyDeletesad. well penned.
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