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Tuesday 28 October 2014

YOU & ME

Day 29 OctPoWriMo 2014
Santos , Brazil 2013

You and me holding Hand in hand
Looking intently at each other
Remembering our first embrace
Melting in that moment

Flowing freely with the Zephyr
Silken tresses lock with your curls
Smoldering touch awakens
The Burning longing

Swaying in the rain
Kisses dissolved like sugar
Euphoric sensations surfaced
Love bonds forever.


~29/10/2014~

14 comments:

  1. How lovely when the commitment continues to renew! Beautiful work.
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  2. You got me at the last verse. Simply amazing! Very little kindles love than a kiss in the rain. Love the image!

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  3. Love blossoms once again ! Love never ends to blossom again :) ! embrace ! beautiful poem ! stay blessed

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    1. I completely agree with u.. my error here.. failed to actually bring in the right emotion.. thnx fr ur blessings.. :)

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