Day 29 OctPoWriMo 2014
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| Santos , Brazil 2013 |
You and me holding Hand in hand
Looking intently at each other
Remembering our first embrace
Melting in that moment
Flowing freely with the Zephyr
Silken tresses lock with your curls
Smoldering touch awakens
The Burning longing
Swaying in the rain
Kisses dissolved like sugar
Euphoric sensations surfaced
Love bonds forever.
~29/10/2014~
How lovely when the commitment continues to renew! Beautiful work.
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Yes it is indeed.. thnx
DeleteI love the beauty in this!
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DeleteJust beautiful, thank you!
ReplyDeleteThankyou Jessica
DeleteLove the imagery! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Cindy
DeleteYou got me at the last verse. Simply amazing! Very little kindles love than a kiss in the rain. Love the image!
ReplyDeleteThats very kind .. Thanks Rod
Deletestay blessed! :)
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DeleteLove blossoms once again ! Love never ends to blossom again :) ! embrace ! beautiful poem ! stay blessed
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with u.. my error here.. failed to actually bring in the right emotion.. thnx fr ur blessings.. :)
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