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Thursday, 30 October 2014

Experience


OctPoWriMo 2014 Day 31
 
   From the moment

    Words found meaning

      Journey of Life began

       Smooth silken verse

        Moved like a calm river

         Watering the thoughts

           Nurturing the emotions

            Dissolving the impurities

             Meditating under Banyan

              Finding ‘Nirvana’

               Bestowing cognizance

                To merge into the ocean

                 Of Consciousness
 
                   Finding Ultimate Bliss !
 
                     ~31/10/2014~
 
 

                                     

8 comments:

  1. I love the way your words float ethereally among the falling leaves of Autumn.

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  2. nice form! and this line is exquisite... "the ocean of conciousness."'

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  3. I really like what you did with the format of this poem. It felt more like water to me - like a droplet sliding down a window pane. Lovely thoughts though.

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  4. I love the form you put the poem in and love the words, too.

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