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Thursday, 7 November 2013

Turbulence


Amidst the stench and suffocation
Surrounded by Darkness
I see something crawling
Creeping and screeching
Bleeding copiously
Amidst the oceanic depth
Surrounded by slime
I see something wriggling
Slippery and greasy        
Coughing horrendously
Amidst the turbulence and ignorance
Embed in ambiguity
I felt my soul weeping
Tormenting and racking
Hustling profusely!!


~07/11/2013~

12 comments:

  1. Wow. You went deep and made use of lots of images that caused me to shudder. Thank you. xoA

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    1. I am glad you liked it . Thanks for your appreciation.

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  2. This is very intense, thank you for sharing and participating with us at Poets on the Page.

    "I felt my soul weeping" I know this feeling.

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    1. I loved your OctPro challenge . Though I did not participated but i did read few writes. Thanks for letting us explore more and more.

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  3. Fun wordplay in this piece. Though the subject matter was rough the way you structured the words made it easier to read. Great job!

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    1. Thanks a lot for your kind appreciation.

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  4. Wow! You've packed so much into such a brief poem. May your soul find Life.

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  5. This one is among one of the best pieces of yours ! When your soul weeps remember there is always another soul standing with you

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