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Wednesday, 22 April 2015

The Lost Soul

Scorching heat and sand
burning the feet
sweat on forehead
Oasis nowhere found..

Surrounded by water
stranded by known
toiling towards land
with thoughts to endure...

Engulfed by the vast sky
as it has gone astray
probing for a tree
to rest its weary wings....

enveloped by heads
chained by duties
under the strenuous pressure
lives like a Zombie.....!

~ 22/08/09~
Deeप्ती (Copyright all rights reserved)


  1. is this what it feels like to live without access to the waters of an Inner Life?
    powerful writing- so much communicated

    zannierose A-Z visitor.

  2. Thanks a lot Zamnie Shaman

    I believe this is how one will feel in situations like these..

  3. I could totally feel that. Very nicely written.

    Arlee Bird
    A to Z Challenge Co-host
    Wrote By Rote