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| Temple City - Pushkar, India 2015 |
Surrounded by the recollections
Tumbling down the memory lane
Emerging as a saviour
Pulsating emotions
Survived
Thinking accepted moments
Observing footfalls
Walking proudly
Acquiring the lost strength
Respecting the consequence
Deriving confidence
Satisfied
Trespassing
Humble feelings -
Evolving
Lifting up spirits
Igniting motivation
Grafting perfect identity
Humouring self
Taking – STEPS TOWARDS THE LIGHT!
~05/01/2016~
PoetsOnthepage
I love how the poem starts out languid but turns at "evolving" to finish with light. Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rose
DeleteMay your step towards light lead you to what you are looking for. Beautiful words Deepti.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shaifali
DeleteThe poem takes me on a journey, slowly changing and then affirming. I love that ending line: Taking . . . steps towards the light!
ReplyDeleteThank You Beth for liking and commenting.
DeleteSometimes a line of a poem catches my attention and then I stop and think why.that's how I feel about "respecting the consequence. To me consequences good or bad are an opportunity to learn and deserve our respect. Good job.
ReplyDeleteRightly said Pam.. we need to learn n respect the consequences time shows us..
DeleteI thought I left a comment here so if this is a double up, I apologize.
ReplyDeleteI love the acrostic form of poetry and "Steps towards the light" is brilliant! Well done, thanks for playing along with Poets on the Page!
thanks a lot Morgan for your appreciation. I love your prompts ..
ReplyDeleteLovely positive acrostic! :)
ReplyDeletethankyou dear
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