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Tuesday, 5 January 2016

Steps towards the light

Temple City - Pushkar, India 2015

Surrounded by the recollections
Tumbling down the memory lane
Emerging as a saviour
Pulsating emotions
Survived

Thinking accepted moments
Observing footfalls
Walking proudly
Acquiring the lost strength
Respecting the consequence  
Deriving confidence
Satisfied

Trespassing
Humble feelings -
Evolving

Lifting up spirits
Igniting motivation
Grafting perfect identity
Humouring self
Taking – STEPS TOWARDS THE LIGHT!

~05/01/2016~


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12 comments:

  1. I love how the poem starts out languid but turns at "evolving" to finish with light. Beautiful :)

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  2. May your step towards light lead you to what you are looking for. Beautiful words Deepti.

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  3. The poem takes me on a journey, slowly changing and then affirming. I love that ending line: Taking . . . steps towards the light!

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    1. Thank You Beth for liking and commenting.

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  4. Sometimes a line of a poem catches my attention and then I stop and think why.that's how I feel about "respecting the consequence. To me consequences good or bad are an opportunity to learn and deserve our respect. Good job.

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    1. Rightly said Pam.. we need to learn n respect the consequences time shows us..

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  5. I thought I left a comment here so if this is a double up, I apologize.

    I love the acrostic form of poetry and "Steps towards the light" is brilliant! Well done, thanks for playing along with Poets on the Page!

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  6. thanks a lot Morgan for your appreciation. I love your prompts ..

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