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| My Grandfather with my Grandmother |
Rummaging through phase
Enslaving the acrimony
Flaunting the vigour
Lost in times
Enchanting memories surface
Cumulating the ability
To
Inflict on Present
Observing mammoth timeframes
Nurturing our
Senses
Off-springs of a single seed
Forming exuberant collection
Ongoing progression
Ushers new lives
Reflecting the warmth
Delving deep into
Neurons
Accumulates vitality
~08/01/2016~
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Wow. This is spectacular. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jesi.
DeleteA beautiful use of words. I enjoyed this poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pam for enjoying my piece.
DeleteHow difficult it is to capture the sense of family through generations. That photograph grounds the poem. I hope you write more, for this poem shows deep feeling through abstraction. Makes me wonder at the contrast between "acrimony" and "warmth".
ReplyDeleteThe Contrast which has been brought here is nothing new among families. Their might be hostility among few members but even then the bonding of a Family is always present.That is what makes A Family a family.. :)
DeleteLoved your outlook Beth. Thanks for appreciating my work.
Lovely picture. I specially loved the title. :)
ReplyDeletethanks.. thats my family groups name.. n i wrote this one for us.. this was started long time ago.. finally got to complete it after the prompt.
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