Heaven Screamed
Screeched in agony
Illuminated the scars
that pregnant cloud
ruptured its bag
only to burst open
to cry in pain
aborting the smile
scattered all around
numbing the nebula....!!
Why is it so serene
poised and content?
~23/07/2011~
Screeched in agony
Illuminated the scars
that pregnant cloud
ruptured its bag
only to burst open
to cry in pain
aborting the smile
scattered all around
numbing the nebula....!!
Why is it so serene
poised and content?
~23/07/2011~
I wish I knew , Why is it so serene .It must be your sleepless nights !!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful !!!
please join me Deepti
thanks a lot Amiyaji for liking this.
DeleteWell expressed, vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nithya for liking it
DeleteThis poem with its intensity makes me think of profound loss . . . sadness, perhaps the contentness comes with acceptance that the universe is larger than we can imagine.
ReplyDeleteyou are right Beth.. it depicts the sadness and scars which hurts time and again.. that is the time when one is confused so see calmness all around when inside tornadoes are residing.
DeleteThanks for your comment.