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Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Serenity




Soft                  Dissolving       Spreading
     rhythmic               every                   its
            music                 churning           soothing
               flowed                      knot                 magic
                     freely                    simply               flawlessly.

~13/11/2013~

# This is for Mini Poetry Prompt - Going Deeper.
    Playing with form -  The Pictorial .

Here is the Simpler version to read:-

"Soft rhythmic music flowed freely
Dissolving ever churning knot simply
Spreading its soothing magic flawlessly."
13/11/2013
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2 comments:

  1. Annis Cassells16 November 2013 at 07:47

    Oh, I love this. Wasn't sure "how" to read it at first, but then saw that it cascaded downward like gentle rain. Thank you. xoA

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    1. Deepti Agarwal16 November 2013 at 11:09

      Yes I know this "The Pictorial" Format is a bit confusing to read. But still it is a good format.

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