Day 5
Colours spread on the canvas silently
Like a striking veil, falls radiantly
Creating intricate zigzag pattern
Creasing gentle piece of satin
Yellow, blue and greens sparkles
Smile on her aesthetic lip crackles
Intoxicating aroma surround
Hidden happiness came around
Is it the right time to move on?
Or wait for other patterns to adorn
Colours spread on the canvas silently
Like a striking veil, falls radiantly
Creating intricate zigzag pattern
Creasing gentle piece of satin
Bleeding heart breaks the barrier
It’s time to forgive the hauler
Healing starts its magical miracle
Soul stretches to its pinnacle
Path to different journey enfolds
Natural emotion now demoulds
Wavering abrasions rectify it-self
Therapeutic mood creates self
Colours spread on the canvas silently
Like a striking veil, falls radiantly.
Yellow, blue and greens sparkles
Smile on her aesthetic lip crackles
Mellowing of cheerful heart trails
Adverse thoughts are far on sail
Garden flowers beamed bright
Heightened senses are a delight
Timeworn pallet sits silently on ground
Green vines have entwined around
Pluck the vibrant shades from the lawn
Healing hearts are creating dawn
Colours spread on the canvas silently
Like a striking veil, falls radiantly.
~05/10/2020~
The Licentia Rhyme Form, a poetic form created by Laura
Lamarca, consists of at least 3 12-line stanzas with 11 syllables per line. Of
course, the poem can be elongated adding on to the following rhyme scheme:
aabbccddeeAA, BBffgghhiiAA, CCjjkkllmmAA
The Licentia Rhyme Form is named after Laura Lamarca's
signature, "La" and "Licentia" which is Latin for
"Freedom".
I have tried to use a difficult and new format rather than taking up the other Shape Poetry Format. It was very challenging for me to do this piece but I am satisfied with the end result.
I love seeing you challenge yourself with the new form. I enjoyed reading this from the top down and from the bottom up. Yours is the first this OctPoWriMo that I've read that way. I love seeing how it flows both ways. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your wonderful feedback... I loved working on it...
DeletePrompts are a challenge indeed .. but they let us learn so much more.. thanks for all your edforts..♥
Beautifully written����
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Roshni ..
DeleteHealing begins with forgiveness. Lovely poem.😊
ReplyDeleteyes indeed.. finally understand this..
DeleteHats off to you for pulling this one style of the poem so beautifully :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nima for such lovely words..
DeleteA lovely poem! The words flow beautifully in the Licentia Rhyme form, I enjoyed reading.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nithya
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